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SCORNED (volume 2)

I promised fun all the way, now that I am back, this is part of the package. This is the continuation of the Kate and Femi’s story. Enjoy!

Femi shut the door to their room with a bang and like the door, all the feelings Kate managed to hide in front of Femi comes back with a bang. suddenly, cleaning her face didn’t seem so appealing as she messes up her face with hot tears, “oh my God!” she thought, what went wrong? When did this man suddenly become a monster? What didn’t i do right? 10 solid years. heeeee! chineke merem ebere! Where do i start from? Which man wants a woman with three children? tres? Hey Kate, you are finished; your life is over, choi! Femi, i love him, i love him so much, i can’t live without him or should i go and beg him and ask him to keep the shares. he can even marry that b***h, but please, biko! nkem, don’t send me away. She cries out loud; “no Femi, come back, please! please! please!” she stands up like a woman that’s just come to her senses but acts like a woman that’s lost her mind, she runs out of her house into the compound only to find her husband’s car gone. “Where is my husband?” she asks musa the gate man, the mallam looks puzzled but answers without questions, “oga, i don commot”. Kate shouts at the mallam impatiently. “i know, where did he pass? musa points in the opposite direction; “oga i pass that place” he says. “Kate runs to her car as she screams at musa; “are you dumb? Open the gate” she drives out of her compound in pursuit of her husband.
 She catches up with him as she corners his car, she goes on her kneels in the middle of the road; Femi comes down from his car and walks towards her surprised. “What are you doing?”, Kate replies; “Femi, do you want me to grovel? Here i am, please Femi, i will do anything, don’t leave me, i will be your slave if that’s what it takes for you to be in my life”. She holds on to his legs and cries into his shoes, Femi pushes her away from him and yells at her; “get up! Look at you, you are pathetic, that’s what you are” Kate looks at herself in an oversize top and a faded skinny jeans, it is dirty at the knee caps due to kneeling in the middle of the road, “and you wonder why i am leaving you for Denise, since you already know, yes Denise”. He spits on the floor; “you disgusts me” he says and drives away leaving her on the road.
  Tears streaming down her face like a tap spewing out water, “I am in trouble” she thought to herself. She tries to walk to her car but she couldn’t move, she seemed glued to that spot, her mouth wide open, the pain seemed too intense, she ached only in one place and one place alone, her heart, which she felt would burst in her chest anytime from now; “is it really over? Femi? What happened to for better, for worse? The vow we made before God and man. Her knees gave in under her and she fell on her butt, her mind still active. Her tears seemed endless, cars starts honking for her to leave the road but she couldn’t move. “It’s over; I just want to die now”

  Kate feels a hands on her shoulders; “are you alright, Maam?” she heard the voice say. She nods in her mind but in reality she didn’t. The hand moves her face to look at her eyes and all she could see were clear brown eyes, she asks; “are you Jesus?” the other person laughs and checks her pulse. “Where is your house?”, Kate tries to remember but all she succeeded in doing is mumble incoherent words; “it’s okay, i am a doctor i will take care of you” he carries her to her car, checks her driver’s license and zooms off.

  Hey Dearies! We had things to say about the first but this is a new one and it seems Kate is not as strong as she made us think. Do you think she made a good move by going after her man? What do you think will happen to Kate, now that she is in the hands of a stranger? Check it out soon; in the meantime feel free to share your thoughts.

-SL

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10 Comments

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    Nnebedum Nkiru bravery
    October 3, 2013 at 8:50 am

    So So pathetic, Steph pls finish the story, I can’t wait to know how that poor woman coped up.

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    Dorothy
    October 4, 2013 at 6:21 am

    wow! Stephanie, i like your writing skills. The way you ended this party is incredible though the font uniformity between story itself and end remarks confused me. Next time make a different font for story. as for Kate
    the move she made to beg her husband not to leave her defines how desperate she is.While i think it is a stupid move, I cant overlook the fact that, the situation she is in makes it impossible to think clearly. It is difficult but whenever we face any unpleasant circumstance, let us try to calm down, take our time, think, analyze the situation before we take any action.
    Cant wait for next party.

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    wunmi
    October 5, 2013 at 10:31 am

    its really nt easy 2 let go of some1 u luv, talk least of ur husband of 10 yrs. She sure needs a doc. but she shld pull herself 2geda, so as nt 2 fall into d wrong hands.

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    FRANCIS GRACE
    October 24, 2013 at 3:26 pm

    Wow!!!
    well, wot ever we do, their is always a reason whether right or wrong.
    Kate is just confused, she feels her life is turning upside down, her brain is imbalance. so i wouldn’t say she’s right going after Femi, neither will i say she’s wrong.
    All am gonna say, is that she really need that stranger of a doctor!

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    favour
    October 25, 2013 at 10:07 am

    wow! Wow!! Wow!!!… I think she actualy made a right choice by going after the husband irrespective of her ‘claimed bravery’ which is common amongst women. She knew what she wanted n yes! She went 4 it…bt hmmm.. im only afraid of 1 thing! She might fall 4 d stranger.

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    Celeste
    October 25, 2013 at 3:23 pm

    Wow, I think she did the best thing going after her man. It is always feels good when you fall on your face, then get up again and know you did it. She is stronger than she thinks. She will be ok, and he will come back begging. Mark my words. They always do. But she has to be careful not to get into any other relationship of the rebound.Good luck to Kate.

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    Celeste
    October 25, 2013 at 3:26 pm

    Wow, I think she did the best thing going after her man. It always feels good when you fall on your face, then get up again and know you did it. She is stronger than she thinks. She will be ok, and he will come back begging. Mark my words. They always do. But she has to be careful not to get into any other relationship on the rebound.Good luck to Kate.

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    Porsha utang
    October 25, 2013 at 3:43 pm

    This story Is Realy Amazin And Thrilling..pathetic as well..kate runnin afta her husband and pleadin For him to have his mind change is not bad..a woman should do anythịng to keep her home. What if Femi was testin her trust in him?

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    CHARMEL
    November 18, 2013 at 10:45 am

    Pls Steph finish the story. its so so pathetic but i think she did well going after her man. sometimes, women need to keep aside their pride and beg their husbands. it takes only a woman who truly loves her husband to kneel and beg him with tears in her eyes and on the streets. hmmmmmmm love her courage

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    helen
    December 2, 2013 at 10:28 am

    wow.dis is so pathetic. I think Kate is right by going after femi.pls continue wit d story

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